I saw them rise
I saw them fall
I heard the cries
I heard them all
I saw the tears
I saw the blood
I feared the fears
And tasted mud
I felt the steel
I heard the blade
I raised the seal
I sealed their fates
I drank the wine
I dined with lust
I felt like a swine
Entombed in dust
So here I lay on my dying breaths
A mercenary captain
Burdened with these regrets
I see my friends
I see my foes
Their lives are spent
I feel their loss
I see the end
I hear the call
I see the bend
Then darkness falls
I hope you guys liked this some useful feed back will be appreciated. (I hope the rhyming and rythmn was noticed. Special thanks to Antigonus for making my poem better thanks a lot man
Imagine all the people.....-John Lennon
[This message has been edited by Julius Brutus (edited 02-14-2006 @ 07:48 PM).]